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Aspiring Authors in the Class-

                       room
         Inspired  by  Mr  Boyd’s  story-
         telling  and  writing,  8L1  wrote
         dramatic  action-adventure  sto-
         ries.  A key part of literacy is be-
         ing able to review your work to
         evaluate  how  successful  you
         have been in getting your mes-
         sage across, and of course, mak-
         ing  the  necessary  improve-
         ments.    Sometimes  this  can
         mean  taking  a  blank  page  and
         starting again.   8L1 pupils used
         Mr Boyd’s drafting approach as































                                                                                   a  model  to  improve  their  own
                                                                                   writing.  They read their work to
                                                                                   their  group  and  took  feedback
                                                                                   before  producing  a  second
                                                                                   draft.  Pupils enjoyed sharing
                                                                                   their
                                                                                   writing.








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